Monday, April 25, 2011

Refined Sketch

Here is my refined sketch. It's almost done, I don't really know what to add to it, but I usually hilight the hair in some way, so I might do that.


  1. I think the boarder lines are to heavy on your drawing. Can you keep the same cool shapes but have the black line half a wide?

  2. I was going to say the same thing. This is a cute little comic. The only thing that really distracts me is the bold black line. If you make it a bit thinner and a cool color that matches your pallet it would pull it together nicely.