*Sigh*. I wish I was asleep as opposed to working on this illustration. Tightened up the lines, added more value, changed the time format into more recognizable AM/PM format and, by extension, gave imaginary myself two extra hours of sleep.
The arm looks better, still looks a little off. Can your guy breath? Maybe turn his head to the right some? It looks like he might be dead smothered in his pillow. Maybe this is the I ate a giant marshmallow dream?
I really like the warm colors but the colors seem very alive and awake. You might consider a cooler pallet. I also agree with the above comment the arm does still look off (literally).
*Sigh*. I wish I was asleep as opposed to working on this illustration. Tightened up the lines, added more value, changed the time format into more recognizable AM/PM format and, by extension, gave imaginary myself two extra hours of sleep.
I like it, the values in the blankets and the textures on the table top and floor are great.
ReplyDeleteThe arm looks better, still looks a little off. Can your guy breath? Maybe turn his head to the right some? It looks like he might be dead smothered in his pillow. Maybe this is the I ate a giant marshmallow dream?
ReplyDeleteI really like the warm colors but the colors seem very alive and awake. You might consider a cooler pallet. I also agree with the above comment the arm does still look off (literally).
ReplyDeleteYour figure looks more alive in this. I wish you would have kept the military time. It seemed to add a persoanl touch.
ReplyDeletethis is exactly what i did on sunday... i have a personal connection to this... looks good vadim i think the outlines look a little weird,
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