I added color, and changed a few small things. I worked on the expression more, which was suggested. I think it really helped. For the final, I'll be adding a background, which will probably be dull and rainy. I also want to add some puddles and experiment with reflections in the water. :)
I think the reflections will be a nice touch. I'd also suggest maybe adding rain in a different medium (like white gel pen or light acrylic paints) so you can see the drops of rain over the girls body and not just in the background.
ReplyDeleteI think if you brighten up the rain that would be interesting. I know your going for a bad day and using bland colors but still having you in the illustration with your papers flying with bright, warm colors would still show that it is not cool when papers fly away in not so good weather.
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